Pretty chill jam, dude. If I were to say much about it, I'd say change the rhythm for one of the peices, bass or treble your pick. I'd suggest slowing down the bass and playing some chilled out chords, letting the treble part play the main melody.
Keep up the great work!
Thanks for the feedback! It's my first song, so I'll try to keep that in mind for next time!
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